Now that you have pitched your story to the class, what were some of the problems with your story? Did you get a greenlight? How do you plan to fix those problems? Talk about three different improvements you can make to your story.

Some of the problems I have encountered was having dialog in my script and having to change my script in a way that helps get my story across with no dialog.   I got greenlighted though!!! I’m so happy that people wanted to see my video.  The improvements that I’ve made while discussing the story with my partner was to get rid of the dialog and that’s it.